Comments made on different managers blogs #1

Comment made on Edvin Broberg’s post 
First of all I applause you for your structure and use of language.
In this blog post you come with a lot of new information but you present it in a concise manner that is easy to follow. Not once was the red thread lost and each paragraph has a clear topic. It is a clear timeline on how you did the work with some reasonings on why you did it.
I really like how you […]

Comment #3: Karel

Link to Karel’s Blogpost!
“Hej hej!
You provided a structured and very informative blog post explaining scrum and handling priorities with MoSCoW. I really like that you describe both principles in great detail and connect them to your work on the shoot em up game. The introduction and conclusion you give also create a good framework for the reader to follow.

However, there are a lot of technical terms in your post that could be hard to understand for someone who […]

Critique 3: Ellen Wetterholm

https://buriburifarm.wordpress.com/2018/02/22/post-3-scrum/comment-page-1/#comment-7
 
Very interesting post! I like how you start by giving a clear and concise explanation of what Scrum is and how it does work. Even though as Game Design students we all know what it means, some people tend to have different views or simply not understand how Scrum actually works, so by making clear from the beginning what it means to you, I know as a reader how to react to the rest of the blog.
The overall […]

Critique 2: Carl Leong

https://carlgraphicscourse.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/the-background-as-tool-for-narrative-and-suspense/
 
Very interesting post! I feel like you divided your thoughts in a clean way using these different paragraphs, each having their own idea while still being related with the others. It makes the reading really pleasant and allows the reader to get a concise idea of what you are trying to tell through your post and your art.
Grammatically speaking there is no mistakes I could see and overall I feel like you really tried to explain every design […]

Comment #2 – Mateusz Sieradzinski

Hello Matt!
I found the post very enjoyable, the way you take me as a reader through the whole process, step by step makes it very easy to follow your train of thought and understand both what you did to prepare for the presentation and why you did said thing.
When preparing for the same presentation we did the part about negatives last as we had a hard time coming up with things we were truly displeased with, I wholeheartedly agree that […]

My Blog Comments – Marcus Ford

Leaving all my Blog comments and Url here to avoid making multiple Blogs!
Week #1
Hello ma dude, I am gonna give you some feedback on your blog post :D!
Is it clear what is done?
Yes, you outlined what you did and the thought process that went behind it. The pictures you showed were super helpful to figure out exactly what your text meant and in general it made perfect sense to me.
Is it clear how it is done?
Kinda, I wish you had […]

Blog Comment week 3 On Natasha Bianca Mangan

https://programminggamesafunworkload.wordpress.com/2018/02/22/the-effects-of-scrum-on-my-games-development/comment-page-1/#comment-8
 
Hello Natasha, as a reader I got a clear picture what how scrum have helped you both as a game designer, programmer and how it has helped your group. It is fascinating to be able to read about Scrum in depth, and the effect of what scrum has had in examples the group has had. What the blog mentioned about how Scrum has helpt the group to be a better group is very interesting and relatable.
It is also […]

Blog comment 180227

https://sindors.wordpress.com/2018/02/24/game-design-week-8-thoughts-on-the-scrum-process/
Good work with the blog! I noticed some language inaccuracy, but I had no problem understanding the text.
It seems all teams have had some struggles, be it with the game or dynamics within the team. I feel like you have clearly discussed the parts of scrum you deem important and how scrum has been used by your group. I am surprised you thought the production simple in the beginning and felt the scrum more necessary towards the end, […]

Comment #1 – Clément Pirelli

Hello!
Thank you for a good read, the item, being the light, was well-described and the way you explain the actual production process was great!
I like how you’ve reached your goal by trial and error, a great way to follow the teacher’s instructions to “fail fast”.
A couple of things I want to address; Scrum is a framework that we work in, by writing “second sprint of our scrum” it sounds like scrum itself was a delivery or something along those lines. […]

Blog comment 180220

https://amandacohen58776528.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/blog-post-2-damage-sounds/
Interesting read! Since I personally have very little knowledge of creating sound, it is always intriguing reading about the process behind it. I think it is good that you mention pitch and speed, as that will probably make the sound more varied and pleasing. It would have been nice if you had mentioned what, if any, program you used to create the sound, or if you only used your own recorded sound. Seems very funny to record the […]

Blog comment 180213

https://shifatsilver.wordpress.com/2018/02/08/global-game-jam-2018/
Blog comment 180213
Interesting read! I would personally have chosen to write about an artefact created for the game project, but this also sounds like a relevant experience. I noticed some sentence structures that were slightly “off” and one spelling mistake, but I have no trouble understanding the text.
While you explain your interpretation of the theme of the jam and write that your group had similar thoughts, I would have liked a short presentation of some ideas that did […]

Blog Post 3 Comment

Hello Edvin!
Great to hear you lift some concerns that I’m sure a lot of students have! It was interesting to hear another point of view of the Scrum framework, as well as quite expected that the incremental workflow has been what the group benefitted most from. You have formulated your blog post well with regards to how Scrum has affected you and why. It would have been interesting to hear how you try to deal with the Stand-up meeting issue, […]